Hi! I'm Loni.

I'm a developmental editor for all things weird and what-if. Dragons? I've got you. Steampunk? Bring it on. Something no one has ever seen before, but you're ready to introduce to the world? I'd be honored to help.

You've got a great story. Now all we've got to do is bring out the best in it. Whether you're here to learn or here to work with me, I'm your girl.

 

And remember: You've got this.

This is what I do.
EDITORIAL ASSESSMENT

An analysis of the novel’s first 5,000 words or the equivalent amount of planning materials.

MANUSCRIPT EVALUATION

An editorial letter addressing macro-level issues of structure, plot, and characterization.

SUBSTANTIVE EDIT

A comprehensive edit with marginal notes to help guide the revision process.

Loni is a joy to work with and a consummate professional. She puts an incredible amount of care into every manuscript. Her editorial instincts are solid, and she's one of the best editors on our staff list. I couldn't imagine The Parliament House without her.

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